1) The pitch: Create an app that's similar to waze but for parking. It would be based on the app users, just how waze works. It would show open spots in whichever area you're looking for. The name of the app would be "SmartPark".
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch: My feedback was primarily positive. I was told that I have a clear, articulate voice and was able to be understood. Also, the comments consisted of saying my idea was original and fun! A lot of emphasis on my speech and presentation being up to par. There were no negative comments that were ridiculous.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback: Based on my feedback, I should keep up my good performance, articulate during my speech, and project my voice.
https://youtu.be/GgWJQe-5koo
Hi Nham,
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like you and your partner thought of a great idea. I’ve defiantly been in that situation where everyone is waiting around trying to get parking but there isn’t a clear or controlled way to do so. It sounds like “SmartPark” could be a good solution for this type of situation. If you get the chance, check out my post at the below link.
http://ryangsharpe.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hello Nham,
ReplyDeleteI really love your idea! Your pitch was so clear and articulated. If I were to give you a feedback, I would recommend you to stand up and wear like a real sales person! I was wearing my suit when I did my pitch, and I received a lot of positive comments from our classmates! Overall, great job though! Please visit my blog and give me some feedback on my elevator pitch. It is http://bongjukang.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Nham,
ReplyDeleteI think you have a great idea. Your pitch was very clear and you articulated all of the words very well. The only tip I would give is to dress a little more professionally and stand up as it makes you seem more passionate, serious, and enthusiastic about your product. Great job overall and good luck with the rest of the class. If you would like to check out my post, the link is:
http://colehouser.blogspot.com/2016/03/growing-my-social-capital.html